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 [charaFace F 8]
 ＠Takasugi Shinsaku
-The Kinnou Party is obsessed with bringing back the Bakumatsu dream, even though it's completely impossible.
+The Kinnou Party is obsessed with their dream of reviving the Bakumatsu era, impossible though it may be.
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 [charaFace F 12]
 ＠Takasugi Shinsaku
-It's such a shame. People used to worship the ground the Kinnou guys walked on...
+It's such a shame. The Kinnou used to be revered for their loyalty to the emperor.
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 [charaFace F 20]
 ＠Takasugi Shinsaku
-But now that we're in this Restoration period, it's like Kinnou is all they can talk about.
+But now that we're in this Restoration period, it's just gotten old. They won't accept that it's over. They keep yapping. Kinnou this, Kinnou that.
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@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ Yup, we are.
 
 [charaFace F 20]
 ＠Takasugi Shinsaku
-And unfortunately, they've decided their ends justify their means...
+And unfortunately, they've decided that the ends justify the means they've been using...
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 [charaFace F 12]
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ And unfortunately, they've decided their ends justify their means...
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 ＠Takasugi Shinsaku
-Lately, they've even resorted to selling Restoration Manjyu ripoffs called Kinnou Manjyus on the black market.
+Lately, they've even resorted to selling Restoration Manjyu rip-offs called Kinnou Manjyu on the black market.
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@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ Chacha knows what you mean. They look ridiculous, but they're surprisingly stron
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 ＠Takasugi Shinsaku
-Indeed. But then, as luck would have it, Sakamoto showed up just as I was wondering what I should do next.
+Indeed. But then, as luck would have it, Sakamoto showed up just as I was debating my next course of action.
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 [charaFace F 13]
@@ -232,7 +232,7 @@ At any rate, the Kinnou Party are trying to shape this Singularity to suit their
 
 [charaFace F 1]
 ＠Takasugi Shinsaku
-And I'd like your cooperation in helping me stop them.
+I'd like your help stopping them.
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@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ Hang on. Um... Takasugi, right?
 
 [charaFace C 3]
 ＠Chacha
-What about what you're trying to get out of this? You're trying to shape this Singularity into what you want too, right?
+What about what YOU'RE trying to get out of this? You're trying to shape this Singularity to suit yourself, aren't you?
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@@ -274,7 +274,7 @@ Hehehe. Flattery will get you nowhere!
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 ＠Chacha
-Chacha once had a lot of problems thanks to negotiations like this, so Chacha knows we need to be ruthless.
+Chacha's been burned before in negotiations like this, so Chacha knows we need to be ruthless.
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 [charaFace C 4]
@@ -290,7 +290,7 @@ And if things don't go our way, well, that's why Chacha dug both an outer and an
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 ＠Takasugi Shinsaku
-You want to know what I want? That's easy. This...Singularity, you said it's called?
+You want to know what I want? That's easy. This...Singularity, you called it?
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@@ -388,7 +388,7 @@ We fought each other for the Holy Grail amidst a conflux of events that would ne
 
 [charaFace F 1]
 ＠Takasugi Shinsaku
-Anyway, one thing led to another, and the Holy Grail ended up in my possession.
+Anyway, one thing led to another, and the Holy Grail found its way into my possession.
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 ＠Takasugi Shinsaku
@@ -403,7 +403,7 @@ And with its power, this Singularity solidified into what it is now.
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 ＠Chacha
-But why? You just said you wanted to destroy this Singularity. Can't you use the Holy Grail to do just that?
+But why? You just said you wanted to destroy this Singularity. Can't you use the Holy Grail to return everything to the way it should be?
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@@ -472,7 +472,7 @@ That's right. The Kinnou Party somehow got their hands on it.
 
 [charaFace B 6]
 ＠Sakamoto Ryouma
-Lady Oda Nobunaga, the supreme warlord of the Warring States period...
+Lady Nobunaga, the supreme warlord of the Warring States period...
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 ＠Sakamoto Ryouma
@@ -487,7 +487,7 @@ I haven't been able to prove it yet, but I've got a hunch her head is mixed up i
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 ＠Chacha
-Geh! Now that you mention it, Chacha gets the feeling Auntie's head is probably involved with this, too.
+Geh! Now that you mention it, Chacha feels like Auntie's head could definitely be involved here.
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 ＠Chacha
@@ -563,7 +563,7 @@ Wow, Sakamoto. This [&guy:lady] really trusts you, doesn't [&he:she]?
 
 [charaFace F 7]
 ＠Takasugi Shinsaku
-I know I'd only trust a shifty-looking snake like him as far as I could throw him, but you do you, I guess.
+I sure wouldn't place much trust in a snake like him, but you do you, I guess.
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 [charaFace F 0]
@@ -654,7 +654,7 @@ Huh? Chacha thought we were going to work together!
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 ＠Chacha
-Now you're suddenly telling us to die with a smile on your face!? Who do you think you are, his Imperial Highness!?
+And now you're smiling at us and telling us to die!? Who do you think you are, His Imperial Highness!?
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@@ -684,7 +684,7 @@ How do you figure that!?
 [charaFace F 9]
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 ＠Takasugi Shinsaku
-Never mind that now. I'd get ready to fight if I were you, or my soldiers here are going to fill you full of holes.
+Never mind that now. I'd get ready to fight if I were you, or my soldiers here will riddle you with holes.
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@@ -766,7 +766,7 @@ You got guts, I'll give you that!
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 ＠Mori Nagayoshi
-But they ain't gonna do you much good when you're dead!
+But these clowns aren't gonna do much for you when you're dead!
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@@ -798,7 +798,7 @@ So I guess I'd better power up my soldiers a little more.
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 ＠Mori Nagayoshi
-Huh? You think a bunch of grunts is gonna be a match for frigging Servants!?
+Huh? You think a bunch of grunts're gonna be a match for friggin' Servants!?
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@@ -809,7 +809,7 @@ Huh? You think a bunch of grunts is gonna be a match for frigging Servants!?
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 ＠Takasugi Shinsaku
-I do, as a matter of fact.
+In fact, yes.
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 [charaFace F 1]