$94-02-75-37-1-0 [soundStopAll] [charaSet A 7031000 1 "Jeanne Alter"] [charaSet B 2032000 1 Jeanne] [charaSet C 2032001 1 "Jeanne (Second)"] [charaSet D 6007001 1 "Professor Jekyll"] [charaSet E 1098179200 1 Mordred] [charaSet F 25002000 1 "Katsushika Hokusai"] [charaSet G 6031000 1 Osakabehime] [charaSet H 98002000 1 "Effect Dummy"] [scene 63701] [wipeFilter cinema 0.5 0] [fadein black 1.0] [wait fade] [se ad218] [seVolume ad218 0.1 0.4] [charaTalk A] [charaFace A 0] [charaFadein A 0.4 0,-50] [wt 0.4] @Jeanne Alter ... [k] [charaFadeout A 0.1] [wt 0.1] @ ...At first, I was just drawing manga to beat her. Then, I became obsessed with improving my craft. [k] @ ...And now, I'm chasing after something. Something that's almost...but not quite in my grasp. [k] @ But...when I do finally get hold of it, this dream will be over. Mmm... And it's been such a long dream. [k] @ ...Maybe that's why I'm still out of reach. [k] [messageOff] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk B] [charaFace B 0] [charaFadein B 0.4 0,-40] [wt 0.4] @Jeanne No, that's not it. [k] @Jeanne That's something everybody wishes for to some degree,[sr]but only a select few can ever succeed at doing. [k] [charaFace B 4] @Jeanne Imagination may not have any limit,[sr]but the act of creation does. [k] [charaFadeout B 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk A] [charaFace A 0] [charaFadein A 0.1 256,-40] [charaFace B 0] [charaFadein B 0.1 -256,-40] @Jeanne Alter For you too? [k] [charaTalk B] [charaFace B 1] @Jeanne Of course. [k] @Jeanne I don't think any creator is ever[sr]fully satisfied with their work. [k] [charaTalk A] [charaFace A 6] @Jeanne Alter Huh. Sounds a lot like being a Servant. [k] [charaTalk B] [charaFace B 8] @Jeanne ...That's very deep. [k] [charaTalk A] [charaFace A 4] @Jeanne Alter Whatever you say. [k] [charaFace A 0] @Jeanne Alter ...I've got an idea for a story I kinda want to draw. Wanna hear? [k] [charaFadeout B 0.1] [charaFadeout A 0.1] [wt 0.1] @ I don't know why, but I started telling her what I'd been thinking about. She just smiled and said it was a great idea. [k] @ But it didn't feel right.[sr]Something was...lacking. [k] @ That's when it hit me: I already had someone close to me I could discuss story ideas with. Someone who would share my thrill at coming up with a good one. [k] [messageOff] [seStop ad218 2.0] [fadeout black 2.0] [wait fade] [wipeOff] [scene 63400] [wt 1.5] [cameraMove 0.1 0,0 1.1] [fadein black 2.0] [wait fade] [bgm BGM_EVENT_2 0.1] [se ade206] [wt 2.6] [seStop ade206 0.4] [charaTalk A] [charaFace A 0] [charaFadein A 0.4 0,-20] @Jeanne Alter ...So, you know the book I'm drawing now? [k] ?1:Yes? ?! @Jeanne Alter Do you think it's interesting? [k] [messageOff] [wt 0.1] [cameraMove 0.4 0,20 1.1] [wt 0.4] [cameraMove 0.4 0,0 1.1] [wt 1.0] @Jeanne Alter ...Well that's good. [k] [charaFace A 4] @Jeanne Alter But, don't you think it's still missing something? [k] ?1:Maybe the ending could be more satisfying? [charaFace A 9] @Jeanne Alter ...You're probably right, annoying as it is.[sr]As it stands now, the ending is kinda cheap. [k] @Jeanne Alter It's not about whether it's a happy ending[sr]or a “bad” one. It just doesn't feel earned. [k] ?2:The monster turning back into a human is cliché. [charaFace A 9] @Jeanne Alter ...That part, huh.[sr]Yeah, it is kind of a dead horse now. [k] ?! [charaFace A 0] @Jeanne Alter All right then, what about this? [k] @Jeanne Alter If the monster stays a monster,[sr]and the princess stays a princess... [k] @Jeanne Alter ...do you think they could[sr]still understand one another? [k] ?1:Is mutual understanding that important? [charaFace A 8] @Jeanne Alter So you don't think they need to know everything about each other? Can you really call that true love? [k] [charaFace A 0] @Jeanne Alter ...Ugh, this is complicated.[sr]But then again... Yeah, you might be right. [k] ?2:This princess definitely could. [charaFace A 13] @Jeanne Alter ...You really know this character well, don't you?[sr]But then, I guess you would, after all these loops. [k] ?! [charaFace A 4] @Jeanne Alter ... [k] [messageOff] [charaFadeout A 0.1] [wt 0.1] [se ade206] [wt 2.8] [seStop ade206 0.2] [charaTalk A] [charaFace A 9] [charaFadein A 0.1 0,-20] @Jeanne Alter Hey. [k] ?1:Yeah? ?! @Jeanne Alter Do you REALLY think this is interesting? [k] ?1:I can't tell anymore. [charaFace A 4] @Jeanne Alter ...Yeah, makes sense. You and I've both[sr]been too close to it for too long. [k] ?2:I do. [charaFace A 10] @Jeanne Alter ...Huh. Well, I appreciate that,[sr]even if you are just being nice. [k] ?! [messageOff] [charaFadeout A 0.1] [wt 0.1] [se ade206] [wt 2.8] [seStop ade206 0.2] [charaTalk A] [charaFace A 0] [charaFadein A 0.1 0,-20] @Jeanne Alter Sure is noisy outside. But I guess that's to be expected, what with the beach right below. [k] [charaFace A 9] @Jeanne Alter ...Ugh. Why am I even doing this? [k] @Jeanne Alter I wish I could've just enjoyed[sr]ServantFes like a normal person. [k] ?1:Are you having second thoughts? [charaFace A 4] @Jeanne Alter ...Nah. Just thought I'd say that[sr]out loud and try it on for size. [k] ?2:Yeah... [charaFace A 15] @Jeanne Alter I swear, this is all her fault... [k] ?! [charaFace A 0] @Jeanne Alter ...By the way, I just had a thought. [k] @Jeanne Alter What do you think of adding a scene like this to make the new ending more convincing? [k] ?1:I guess it's fine, but... @Jeanne Alter But what? [k] [charaFace A 8] @Jeanne Alter It'll increase the number of pages we need to draw?[wt 0.4][charaFace A 4][sr]...Well, yeah, that's true... [k] ?2:Won't we need to add another page or two to fit this in? [charaFace A 8] @Jeanne Alter Ugh. Yeah, that's true... [k] ?! [charaFace A 0] @Jeanne Alter I guess it would be pretty tough to add another page or two now, when we're only just squeaking by as it is. [k] @Jeanne Alter ...But...the story needs this scene. [k] ?1:It's also kind of a downer. [charaFace A 16] @Jeanne Alter ...W-well yeah, I know it's not[sr]one of those fun action scenes... [k] @Jeanne Alter ...but if the monster's body and soul are gonna end up all battered, there has to be a battle here, right? [k] @Jeanne Alter It's not enough to just tell the reader about it.[sr]We have to show it. [k] ?2:Then we'll have to rework the entire story structure. [charaFace A 16] @Jeanne Alter ...Y-yeah, I guess so, huh. [k] @Jeanne Alter We'll have to go over the draft again... Restructure the pages... Tighten up the panel layout... [k] ?! [charaFace A 4] @Jeanne Alter ...Guess it's no use. We'll never finish in time. [k] ?1:What if we got everyone else to pitch in? ?! [charaFace A 0] @Jeanne Alter You and I are already doing all the heavy lifting. I'd say Mash is the only one who could help out at all. [k] @Jeanne Alter So we'd have to adjust the panel layouts, add background characters in the battle scene, and...and... [k] [charaFace A 15] @Jeanne Alter ...Ugggh. I'm sorry, I need to go out for a bit. [k] [charaFace A 5] @Jeanne Alter I'm gonna go pick a fight and clear my head.[sr]Come with me. [k] [messageOff] [bgmStop BGM_EVENT_2 1.0] [wipeout leftToRight 1.0 1] [wait wipe] [charaFadeout A 0.1] [cameraHome 0.1] [scene 63200] [wt 1.5] [wipein rightToLeft 1.2 1] [wait wipe] [bgm BGM_EVENT_7 0.1] [charaTalk D] [charaFace D 0] [charaFadein D 0.4 1] [wt 0.4] @Jekyll Oh, hello there. Is there something I can do for you? [k] [charaFadeout D 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk A] [charaFace A 6] [charaFadein A 0.1 1] @Jeanne Alter I'm looking to pick a fight. Any recs?[sr]Say, the overgrown brat you've got working for you? [k] [charaFadeout A 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk E] [charaFace E 2] [charaFadein E 0.1 1] @Mordred You rang, assface? [k] [charaFadeout E 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk D] [charaFace D 5] [charaFadein D 0.1 1] @Jekyll Let me remind you, fighting is strictly prohibited. [k] [charaFadeout D 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk A] [charaFace A 6] [charaFadein A 0.1 1] @Jeanne Alter Then let's take this outside. There shouldn't be any problem with a street fight, right? [k] [charaFadeout A 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk E] [charaFace E 5] [charaFadein E 0.1 0] [charaFace A 6] [charaFadein A 0.1 2] @Mordred What are you, some sort of mad dog? [k] [charaTalk A] [charaFace A 10] @Jeanne Alter Takes one to know one. [k] [charaTalk E] [charaFace E 2] @Mordred The hell'd you say!? [k] [charaTalk A] [charaFace A 6] @Jeanne Alter Come on. Let's do this. [k] [charaTalk E] [charaFace E 2] @Mordred You take that back![sr]Where do you get off calling me a mad dog!? [k] [charaTalk A] [charaFace A 17] @Jeanne Alter ...Uh, cause that's literally your whole deal?[sr]And what're you whining for? You started it.[sr]...Right, [%1]? [k] ?1:No comment. @Jeanne Alter You do know that's basically as good as an affirmation here, right? [k] [charaTalk E] [charaFace E 2] [charaShake E 0.02 2 2 0] @Mordred Master! (Grrrrrr) [k] ?2:I, uh...don't know if I'd put it that way... [charaTalk E] [charaFace E 5] @Mordred Then what way would you put it!? Hey![sr]Look at me when I'm talking to you, asshole! [k] ?! [charaFadeout A 0.1] [charaFadeout E 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk D] [charaFace D 0] [charaFadein D 0.1 1] @Jekyll All right, that's enough. Back to work. [k] [charaFadeout D 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk E] [charaFace E 2] [charaFadein E 0.1 1] @Mordred [messageShake 0.01 4 4 0] [charaShake E 0.02 2 2 0] [f large]GRAAAH! [k] [messageShakeStop] [charaFadeout E 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk D] [charaFace D 5] [charaFadein D 0.1 1] @Jekyll And in the future, please refrain from[sr]taunting my employee, if you wouldn't mind. [k] [charaFadeout D 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk A] [charaFace A 6] [charaFadein A 0.1 1] @Jeanne Alter It was just a little teasing. Lighten up already. [k] [messageOff] [bgmStop BGM_EVENT_7 1.0] [wipeout leftToRight 1.0 1] [wait wipe] [charaFadeout A 0.1] [scene 63100] [wt 1.5] [wipein rightToLeft 1.2 1] [wait wipe] [bgm BGM_EVENT_28 0.1] [charaTalk B] [charaFace B 0] [charaFadein B 0.4 1] [wt 0.4] @Jeanne Oh, hello, Alter. What are you doing out here?[sr]Is your final draft coming along okay? [k] [charaFadeout B 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk A] [charaFace A 0] [charaFadein A 0.1 2] [charaFace B 0] [charaFadein B 0.1 0] @Jeanne Alter I could ask the same of you. [k] [charaTalk B] [charaFace B 6] @Jeanne Oh, I'm all done, thanks! [k] [charaTalk A] [charaFace A 13] @Jeanne Alter ...You don't say. [k] [messageOff] [charaFadeout A 0.1] [charaFadeout B 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk F] [charaFace F 0] [charaFadein F 0.4 1] [wt 0.4] @Katsushika Hokusai You too, huh? Yeah, my own final draft came together pretty quickly. [k] [messageOff] [charaFadeout F 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk G] [charaFace G 4] [charaFadein G 0.4 1] [wt 0.4] @Osakabehime At last...the wings of freedom... [k] [charaFace G 8] @Osakabehime It was way harder than usual this year, but I somehow managed something I was much more satisfied with... [k] [charaFadeout G 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk A] [charaFace A 2] [charaFadein A 0.1 1] @Jeanne Alter You don't say! [k] [charaFadeout A 0.1] [charaScale B 1.3] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk B] [charaFace B 10] [charaFadein B 0.1 0,20] @Jeanne (Psst... Why is Alter in such a foul mood?[sr]Is something wrong?) [k] ?1:We ran into a little trouble with the manga... ?! [charaFace B 8] @Jeanne So...it's not because she's feeling bad? [k] [charaFadeout B 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaScale B 1.0] [charaTalk G] [charaFace G 0] [charaFadein G 0.1 1] @Osakabehime You want to go back to the drawing board? NOW?![sr]Are you insane?! [k] [charaFadeout G 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk A] [charaFace A 2] [charaFadein A 0.1 1] @Jeanne Alter But it'll make the whole thing way better! [k] [charaFadeout A 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk G] [charaFace G 2] [charaFadein G 0.1 1] @Osakabehime What's the point of that if you[sr]don't finish in time for the con!? [k] @Osakabehime I've made that same mistake more than once,[sr]so I know what I'm talking about! [k] @Osakabehime Trust me when I say that missing the deadline sucks a lot more than putting out something you're not fully satisfied with! [k] @Osakabehime This is your first con, so I get that you don't really wakarunderstand that yet, but[line 2] [k] [charaFadeout G 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk A] [charaFace A 2] [charaFadein A 0.1 1] @Jeanne Alter I know it, believe me! [k] @Jeanne Alter I've already drawn a ton of[line 2]Uh,[sr]I mean, first time or not, I get it! [k] [charaFadeout A 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk F] [charaFace F 5] [charaFadein F 0.1 1] @Katsushika Hokusai In that case, maybe you oughta just accept what you got and put it all together as best you can? [k] [charaFadeout F 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk A] [charaFace A 4] [charaFadein A 0.1 1] @Jeanne Alter ...Yeah, I guess. [k] [charaFadeout A 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk B] [charaFace B 0] [charaFadein B 0.1 1] @Jeanne ...Hmm. Now I see. [k] @Jeanne By the way, Alter, why did you[sr]come out here in the first place? [k] [charaFadeout B 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk A] [charaFace A 0] [charaFadein A 0.1 1] @Jeanne Alter I was looking to pick a fight[sr]so I could blow off some steam. [k] [charaFadeout A 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk G] [charaFace G 5] [charaFadein G 0.1 1] @Osakabehime Fighting as stress relief? I just get up and stretch for a while, but you do you, I guess. [k] [charaFadeout G 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk B] [charaFace B 5] [charaFadein B 0.1 1] @Jeanne ...All right. In that case, we'll be your opponents. [k] [charaFadeout B 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk G] [charaFace G 2] [charaFadein G 0.1 1] @Osakabehime Huh!? [k] [charaFadeout G 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk A] [charaFace A 5] [charaFadein A 0.1 1] @Jeanne Alter ...You? Really? [k] [charaFadeout A 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk B] [charaFace B 1] [charaFadein B 0.1 1] @Jeanne Yes, me. Don't worry about it. [k] @Jeanne Hold on, let me just go get my partner. [k] [messageOff] [bgmStop BGM_EVENT_28 0.4] [se ad88] [charaFadeout B 0.1] [wt 1.0] [charaTalk off] [charaFace B 0] [charaFadein B 0.4 1] [wt 0.4] [charaEffect H bit_talk_36] [se ad39] [wt 1.5] [fadeout white 1.0] [wait fade] [charaFadeout B 0.1] [charaPut H 1200,1200] [charaEffectStop H bit_talk_36] [charaSet B 1098157000 1 Reece] [charaDepth B 4] [charaDepth C 6] [charaFace C 0] [charaFace B 0] [charaFadein C 0.1 1] [charaFadein B 0.1 1] [wt 1.0] [fadein white 0.4] [wait fade] [bgm BGM_EVENT_3 0.1] [wt 0.7] @Jeanne Are you all set? [k] [charaFadeout C 0.1] [charaFadeout B 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk on] [charaTalk A] [charaFace A 0] [charaFadein A 0.1 1] @Jeanne Alter ...I've got no idea what's going through that empty head of yours... [k] @Jeanne Alter ...but if you're offering to help me blow off steam, I'm not gonna pass up this chance. [k] [charaFace A 2] @Jeanne Alter Get ready, 'cause I'm gonna sock you good! [k] [charaFadeout A 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk F] [charaFace F 0] [charaFadein F 0.1 1] @Katsushika Hokusai Wait, I'm doin' this too?[sr]Ah well, I guess them's the breaks. [k] [charaFace F 9] @Katsushika Hokusai Now that my final draft's all done, breakin' a finger or two oughta be good for a laugh! [k] [charaFadeout F 0.1] [wt 0.1] [charaTalk G] [charaFace G 2] [charaFadein G 0.1 1] @Osakabehime If you think that's funny,[sr]I don't wanna know what you find tragic! [k] [messageOff] [fadeout black 0.5] [bgmStop BGM_EVENT_3 0.4] [wait fade] [soundStopAll] [end]